Friday, May 30, 2008

"What Can I Get For You? #2

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I took yesterday's painting to a critique group and they had alot of good observations and suggestions--remove the light on the left, have a clearer idea of where the light source is, show more depth, put some light on the red sweatshirt. . .so I tried some of these and I do think the painting works better. It is so helpful to get some fresh eyes to look at these!

1 comment:

Mary Sheehan Winn said...

The redesign of the upper left to include the shiny circular pot is well thought out as it echoes the shapes of the heads and other elements of the painting.